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Thursday, March 17, 2011
Poem - Seon Hwa
Cold is killing me
I was very painful
Rice was bitter, and I didn't want to eat
I went to hopital by bus with painful body
To make matters worse, it was raining
I wanted to swear at the sky
Seon-- You know it is said "a picture is worth a thousand words." You were able to convey, in just six lines, the chilling picture of your pain. Keep up your writing. You have a gift.
Seon--You know it's said "a picture is worth a thousand words." You were able to convey, in just six lines, the picture of your pain in chilling clarity. Keep writing. You have a gift!
Seon-- You know it is said "a picture is worth a thousand words." You were able to convey, in just six lines, the chilling picture of your pain. Keep up your writing. You have a gift.
ReplyDeleteSeon--You know it's said "a picture is worth a thousand words." You were able to convey, in just six lines, the picture of your pain in chilling clarity. Keep writing. You have a gift!